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I think of ways
To waste away
With this time left unpaid

I sit and reflect
On the breath in my chest
And the words left unsaid

I rot and writhe in darkness
My heart helpless and a mess
Filled with this sick unrest

I look up and see nothing
I look inside and see worse than nothing
I watch the lies and hear the sighs

The lonely breaths of emptiness
Into an empty world only I know
The one I created for myself

You may breach the castle walls
But the stone will never crumble
And the fortress will never fall

Who hears the cries of a helpless child
Who hears the cracking of a broken heart
Who hears the death of a dying smile

Watch the words twist in agony
Writhing upon the cold hard ground
Burning to ash like paper set to flame

A dead world unknown to others
Wrapped in words of hurt
And fires that burn forever

The plains of Hell never looked so heavenly
Inspired by My Own Hell by Five Finger Death Punch [link] and Pepper By The Butthole Surfers [link]
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Mariosonicanimefan Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That us AWESOME
I even tried to sing it :XD:
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Shikyo-Uchiha Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Awww thank you very much ^^
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:iconmariosonicanimefan:
Mariosonicanimefan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome ^^
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Student Writer
It's desperately vivid... I like it =)
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Shikyo-Uchiha Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Im glad you do ^^
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Contradictory55 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Writer
:glomp:
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Blaiseblue Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
<3 love it.
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Shikyo-Uchiha Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Yay! ^^
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faerie37 Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2013
Darkly and beautifully done..this I find lovely.
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Shikyo-Uchiha Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Im glad you do :)
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